new FS rune - Firk War Master

[AkiHoshi]

name: Firk War Master

Appearance: brawly firk with half plate armor and very decorated spear in one hand. and a aura of psychic power all around.

Description: "these warriors are chosen from birth to be powerful leaders of entire armies. Once picked, the young firk is not seen again until his mind and strength are beyond the measure of the war master before him. Their powers seem to surge greater than the powerful swamp itself." - Gekaal

race: Firk
class: warrior
rarity: exotic
size: 1x1
stats:
atk: 14
def: 18
spd: 9
rng: 1
dmg: 10
hp: 48
Base cost: 52 nora
total cost: 85 nora

basic idea and concept:
more of a main battle champ to help with close the gap between ranged champs. and create more synergy between bogghoppers and firks.

Abilities:
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Attack - Physical
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Spear throw: This unit makes an spear attack at a range of 2-5.
(Nora : 4, CP : 12, AP : 4, Cooldown : 3)
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Psychic Flash: This champion deals 6 psychic damage to each champion within 2 spaces (Shrines take half damage). All champions in area are blinded 2 and distracted 3.
(Nora : 14, CP : 42, AP : 4, Cooldown : 4)
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Bog striker: While this champion occupies water, mud or slime terrain, it gains +5 damage.
(Nora : 6 CP : 18 AP : 0 Cooldown : 0)
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Nimble: when activated this champion gains Arrow Eater for 1 turn. this is a hidden effect.
(Nora : 6 CP : 18 AP : 0 Cooldown : 4)*
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Amphibious: This champion ignores restrictions and penalties imposed by Water.
(Nora : 3 CP : 9 AP : 0 Cooldown : 0)
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Planar Instability: When another copy of this unit is in play that you own, both it and this copy are destroyed.
(Nora : 0, CP : 0, AP : 0, Cooldown : 0)
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Upgrades:
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Hidden: Water 1: At the end of your turn, if this champion occupies Water, it becomes Stealthed. Otherwise, it loses Stealthed.
(Nora : 7 CP : 21 AP : 0 Cooldown : 0)
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Shout of Command: champion gains commander: warrior (Other warriors you own gain 5 HP and +1 DMG when this ability is activated. Champions with this ability do not gain this effect. This effect does not stack.) for 2 rounds.
(Nora : 6, CP : 18, AP : 2, Cooldown : 4)**
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Camaraderie: Champions that share a race with this champion cost 7 less Nora.
(Nora : 7 CP : 21 AP : 0 Cooldown : 0)
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* - this is equal cost to arrow eater cause it is only temporary but it is also hidden.
** - I made this skill +3 nora to the cost of commander: range(Commander: Ranger: Other Rangers you own gain 5 HP and +1 DMG when this unit is in play. Champions with this ability do not gain this effect. This effect does not stack. (Nora : 3 CP : 9 AP : 0 Cooldown : 0)) because even though this ability is the same effect, Warrior has a much bigger population of champs than rangers.


so what do you all think of the Firk War Master?

[frogfarmer]

Looks pretty good to me, maybe too many abilities, but it is Exo, so I dunno. Perhaps change Spear Throw somehow, right now it's identical to Arrow Shot. And maybe give him 1-2 range, since he is using a spear.

All in all, pretty cool stuff here.

[AkiHoshi]

Looks pretty good to me, maybe too many abilities, but it is Exo, so I dunno. Perhaps change Spear Throw somehow, right now it's identical to Arrow Shot. And maybe give him 1-2 range, since he is using a spear.

All in all, pretty cool stuff here.

ya I actually did just seriously copy and paste arrow shot on there lol

I think it needs to be toned down a bit but I kinda liked some of the abilities.

I kinda liked the idea of nibble cause it makes it to where he doesn't dodge but takes very little damage for a turn from range, atleast giving him the ability to run in without takeing massive amounts of damage anyways

and he does only have 9 damage so idk damage to cost how much he would be used. but a nice tank for the most part ^_^

[DaGhost]

While I am all down for a Firk having some nice abilities i think taking firks away from Psychic damage, even though it is heavily resisted, is a bad idea in general.

That being said you still have a great idea and i think we can salvage all ends into two champions
Basically redesign the rune as a boghopper and substitute leap 3 in for his psychic ability.

Then begin to work on the new firk that has the aura ability

Reasons are as follows, aside from Sensorate All Fs warriors are boghoppers. He seems to be flavored so much as a boghopper who trecks the swamps hunting and searching, it just seems like a good fit for him.

Definitely rare as he isn't doing anything to much better than anyone else

Lower his defense a bit, and raise his base speed and damage at least a point and then take off about 3 nora. Thats a good design for the new Boghopper Swamp Lancer or something cool like that

[AkiHoshi]

While I am all down for a Firk having some nice abilities i think taking firks away from Psychic damage, even though it is heavily resisted, is a bad idea in general.

That being said you still have a great idea and i think we can salvage all ends into two champions
Basically redesign the rune as a boghopper and substitute leap 3 in for his psychic ability.

Then begin to work on the new firk that has the aura ability

Reasons are as follows, aside from Sensorate All Fs warriors are boghoppers. He seems to be flavored so much as a boghopper who trecks the swamps hunting and searching, it just seems like a good fit for him.

Definitely rare as he isn't doing anything to much better than anyone else

Lower his defense a bit, and raise his base speed and damage at least a point and then take off about 3 nora. Thats a good design for the new Boghopper Swamp Lancer or something cool like that

so basicly split this guy into two champions, a bogghopper lancer and firk aura kinda guy.

ya I noticed that most of the useable bogghoppers are warriors that was kinda why I wanted to give him that limited commander ability with the firk abilities.

and idk about raising his damage... honestly with bog striker this guy would be dishing out 14 to 15 damage most of the time.

[AkiHoshi]

haha maybe this is what the new Firk hero should have been ^_^

[Gutsa]

Wayyy to good imo. I mean it can blind and distract champions within 3 spaces, which is its melee condition. Has a ranged atack.can get +5 damage on water which is easy now for FS. I suggest to do something a bit more worser on him.

[AkiHoshi]

Wayyy to good imo. I mean it can blind and distract champions within 3 spaces, which is its melee condition. Has a ranged atack.can get +5 damage on water which is easy now for FS. I suggest to do something a bit more worser on him.

what do you think about popping planar instability on him to make sure your only facing one of these guys?
and how about unequippable?


and yes I think he is pretty beefy for a champion.

[DaGhost]

so basicly split this guy into two champions, a bogghopper lancer and firk aura kinda guy.

ya I noticed that most of the useable bogghoppers are warriors that was kinda why I wanted to give him that limited commander ability with the firk abilities.

and idk about raising his damage... honestly with bog striker this guy would be dishing out 14 to 15 damage most of the time.

Most of the time is a gross overstatement. No champion can grant trail water, and all FS waters spells are primarily used for a direct effect such as removing relics or casting FF/Drown. You would have to be crazy to waste a spell just so this guy could do 5 more damage.

I really think losing the aura may prevent some of what happened just above my post, but then again if you try to design any champion in FS all the forum tards will just come in here and say OMG thats op without giving reasoning or flawed ones at that.

[Gutsa]

what do you think about popping planar instability on him to make sure your only facing one of these guys?
and how about unequippable?


and yes I think he is pretty beefy for a champion.

What can planar instability do to FS?

[AkiHoshi]

What can planar instability do to FS?

um make it to where only one of these can be on the field at a time.....

Planar Instability: When another copy of this unit is in play that you own, both it and this copy are destroyed.

[AkiHoshi]

this guy .

[Monroid]

Could even be a hero or some kind of "protector" to serve as the theme for next expansion (just like Titans and the Angles)

Really cool physical beating Firk

[AkiHoshi]

Could even be a hero or some kind of "protector" to serve as the theme for next expansion (just like Titans and the Angles)

Really cool physical beating Firk

ya I think I need to really tone him down but I forgot about him awhile ago till you said that LOL

he really is an uber rune!
I figured with planar instability he would be a little more realistic, but I think I was wrong LOL

think I'm going to cost him up though and see what he is worth ^_^

[AkiHoshi]

OK!!! this champ has had a bit of a make over!

I completely costed him and made him all professional looking.

changed up his abilities a bit

what do yall thing?

[actionjack]

Powerful, yet well balance by its cost and abiltie's CD.
Would be a very effective champion. Well put.

[AkiHoshi]

Powerful, yet well balance by its cost and abiltie's CD.
Would be a very effective champion. Well put.

thanks ^_^ I think he is very much equivlent to like a general or some lesser form of a hero.
not really sure if he would be an auto-include due to the steep cost though.

[actionjack]

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[Monroid]

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WOSH!! CURSE YOU, REPUTATION SYSTEM!! I NEED TO REP ACTIONJACK!!!
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[dukerock]

WOSH!! CURSE YOU, REPUTATION SYSTEM!! I NEED TO REP ACTIONJACK!!!
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LOL me as well actionjack we owe u quite a bit of rep

[asqapro]

LOL me as well actionjack we owe u quite a bit of rep

ACTION NEEDS MORE REP.


Overall a playable and pretty-well balanced champ imo, perfect for next expansion.

[Monroid]

Overall a playable and pretty-well balanced champ imo, perfect for next expansion.

I agree, make a new expansion theme with one of those for every faction!! (I will help with the sprites if you want :D)

[dukerock]

im not sure what you mean by one of each for next expansion, what theme sorta thing are you talking about?

[Monroid]

im not sure what you mean by one of each for next expansion, what theme sorta thing are you talking about?

I mean, the description says it's a warrior trained since it is born, so, it could be some whicked kind of paladin for every faction, like the angels :)

[AkiHoshi]

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actionjack would have a rep of admin by now if there wasn't a limit lol ^_^

THANKS MAN!!!
that is badass
I really wish I could +rep you again lol

[AkiHoshi]

I agree, make a new expansion theme with one of those for every faction!! (I will help with the sprites if you want :D)

haha make generals next ^_^
that would be cool!!

[dukerock]

hmm like maybe a goblin weapon master or something for UD?

[AkiHoshi]

hmm like maybe a goblin weapon master or something for UD?

i think he needs some more HPs for that but you could make a Goblin general based off of that maybe?

[Monroid]

i think he needs some more HPs for that but you could make a Goblin general based off of that maybe?

Ack... but SL alrady has a General :'(

[AkiHoshi]

Ack... but SL alrady has a General :'(

just a skeex general...
idk if draksar lord is the general of his army... hmm
idk.... that is a good point

everyone has kings sort of, and heros but no gernerals besides SL

[Monroid]

just a skeex general...
idk if draksar lord is the general of his army... hmm
idk.... that is a good point

everyone has kings sort of, and heros but no gernerals besides SL

Maybe the "War Masters" as it's writen on your Firk's name... but that wouldn't sound good for protectorate... emm... the... "Chosen Guardians"?

[dukerock]

hmm... it doesnt technicaly need to be a theme expansion although i bet they will try to make it one. idk lets all brainstorm names and stuff to make our exotics themed. Your rune is FS Monroids Hayeanids Pack Leader can be SP and my Goblin master can be UD

[AkiHoshi]

hmm... it doesnt technicaly need to be a theme expansion although i bet they will try to make it one. idk lets all brainstorm names and stuff to make our exotics themed. Your rune is FS Monroids Hayeanids Pack Leader can be SP and my Goblin master can be UD

sounds like a good plan to me ^_^