Darkmarsh Blackstaff should be " Now they gaze in awe...." remove 're from they Maybe add some commas to keep the same pacing through the last sentence. Or it's like him yelling to the heavens which in that case, no commas.
The problem is that it is actually not every 6 turns, it is every 3rd turn of THAT champion, which is why it's worded that way. 6 turns would mean that it spawns at the end of the opponent's turns instead, which is doable, but changes the nature of the ability. Both 5, 6 and 7 turns are inaccurate to describe that is happening here, because it's actually initially 5 turns...
Awesome thread man. I have to ask though, what about runes that don't really have errors, but don't strictly work as intended(you know, like RD)?
would 6 turns not work fundamentally the same? it would simply allow them to have AP on spawn which personally i think that's okay.
even though there is no comma, this is how it would be read now. "...,but it takes a certain agility to master the art with a Corgi, mounted whose cadence when running provides a certain challenge." "...master the art with a Corgi mounted..." & also "...with a Corgi mounted whose cadence when running...? Why the bestiality? @Sokolov you prefer action over what's proper? This is the proper form of the noun 'Corgi Mount' "...,but it takes a certain agility to master the art with a Corgi Mount whose cadence when running provides a certain challenge." "...,but it takes a certain agility to master the art with a Corgi Mount, whose cadence when running provides a certain challenge." Or just remove the word mounted...ya animal lover @Sokolov "...,but it takes a certain agility to master the art with a Corgi, whose cadence when running provides a certain challenge." "The Corgi Ranger(proper noun) called for his Corgi Mount(proper noun)" or "The Corgi Ranger called for his Corgi(proper noun)."
"I am riding a mount." "What kind of mount?" "It is a Corgi mount." Mount is a generic term for an animal that one can ride on - it is not a proper noun? The only proper noun here is Corgi. Why should mount be capitalized? I feel like I am missing something. And the word here is necessary because if we just removed it: "It takes a certain agility to master the art with a Corgi, whose cadence when running provides a certain challenge." It is less clear that the Corgi is being mounted in the sentence.